Once upon a time, not long past,
In a world of magic
There was a man, majestic man
Whose love turn’d quite tragic.
He was a man, a foolish man
Who thought not of the cost,
Because of his rigidity
His love, to him, is lost.
He found a girl, a pretty girl
And claimed her for his own,
Thought she’d desire him too
And rule on his hearts throne.
His love was pure, his eyes clouded,
The girl mistook intent
For want of villainous ruin
And left him in torment.
He was a man, a foolish man
Who thought not of the cost,
Because of his rigidity
His love, to him, is lost.
He set a trap to catch this girl,
This man, this Goblin King.
To lure her to the Underground,
Her brother he did bring.
He trick’d this girl, his mortal girl,
To wish the child away.
He took her to his Labyrinth
In hopes that she would stay.
Alas, she chose to fight him off,
His heart and maze, she won,
Back to the mortal world she took
His life and would-be son.
He was a man, a foolish man
Who thought not of the cost,
Because of his rigidity
His love, to him, is lost.















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Fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave.
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You could write one about Sarah, and maybe the aftermath, how after awhile she realized how mistaken she was?
Perhaps I could do that, but I'm not sure. I don't know how poetically I could really do Sarah. Realizations of being wrong are more of a prose thing for me. Actually, I want to say it happens in all of my Labyrinth prose.
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...and then...
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Fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave.
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Ah, I see your point, there. Maybe one day when you're bored you could take a whack at a poetical version of it, or whatever you wanna do ^-~
I like it, even though I've never seen the movie....
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~~Blue Satine~~
Thanks for the comment!
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Fear me, love me, do as I say and I will be your slave.
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